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I'm a librarian who loves anime, manga, and reading a wide variety of genres.

Currently reading

The Devotion of Suspect X
Keigo Higashino, David Pittu
Progress: 365/542 minutes
Game Slaves
Gard Skinner
Progress: 66/320 pages
The Red Book of Primrose House: A Potting Shed Mystery
Marty Wingate
Princess Prince
Tomoko Taniguchi
Progress: 310/336 pages
FREE: Locke & Key
Tatiana Maslany, Audible Studios, Joe Hill, Gabriel Rodríguez, Kate Mulgrew, Haley Joel Osment, Full Cast
Progress: 91/806 minutes

Reading progress update: I've read 66 out of 320 pages.

Game Slaves - Gard Skinner

At some point in this story, Phoenix and his team got to know Dakota well enough to sit with her and comfort her as she tried to deal with the realization that she's just a computer program (not really a spoiler since they've all referred to themselves as NPCs since the beginning).

 

The problem: readers weren't invited to any of that. We somehow jumped from Phoenix finding Dakota's freakouts during battle annoying to Dakota learning how to fit in more with the team without any of it ever showing up on-page. As a result, this whole crying and hugging scene just comes across as weird and out-of-character.