I'm a librarian who loves anime, manga, and reading a wide variety of genres.
I stopped early last night and plan to get through more today. Unfortunately, this one is also going to require some comments about the writing/translation:
Saya's conscious was overwhelmed with the fact that the musician's bow had stopped moving, and his eyes were pointed straight at her. (13-14)
I think it's supposed to be "consciousness," not "conscious."